Thursday, January 17, 2013

Just waffle

It was a dismal moment, 
when you refused to say,
if you would make a life
with me; just waffle, it's
your way. And yet the 
offering remained, 
in luscious tease of time,
and I could only wait
and watch, until you 
made up your mind.

Dismal; adjective: Depressing, dreary; (of a person or a mood) gloomy; (informal) pitifully or disgracefully bad.
Luscious; adjective: (Of food or wine) having a pleasingly rich, sweet taste; richly verdant or opulent; (of a woman) very sexually attractive.
Waffle; verb: Fail to make up one’s mind; speak, write, especially at great length, without saying anything important or useful; noun: A failure to make up one’s mind.


  1. She should be stronger, the more he dithers the less he should become in her eyes.

    1. Quite right but it is not necessarily a she!

  2. It's hard to be in love with someone who doesn't love as much

  3. Nicely done. The story flowed nicely and the integration of the three words unobtrusive.