Saturday, January 19, 2013

Dream girl

Photo: Bruno C. Art Photos.

In corrugated, crippled world I wait,
until the dream has broken into life,
where scattered dust of hopes reveal,
that holding fast will root in deepest need.


And now, on to our Trifextra.  We want you to choose one of the pictures below and give us a 33-word response to it.

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15 comments:

  1. Some great sentiments here in so few words. Well done.

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  2. Trim and frugal use of words. Well written.

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  3. 'dream has broken into life..."
    I love that line. It says all.

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  4. I agree with Renee, love that line!

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  5. You used the 33 words to full effect!

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  6. Great use of 33 words. I like the flow of "corrugated, crippled world".

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  7. Corrugated, crippled world - that's very nice. We can hope and dream.

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  8. Wonderful - I believe she will go far! Very inspiring.

    Cheryl

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  9. I love how powerful it was for it's length... very well written.

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  10. Yes,"holding fast" is the key:-)Loved the imagery with "corrugated, crippled world " & "scattered dust of hopes"-very beautifully expressed:-)

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