Saturday, January 19, 2013

Dream girl

Photo: Bruno C. Art Photos.

 In corrugated, crippled world I wait,
until the dream has broken into life,
where scattered dust of hopes reveal,
that holding fast will root in deepest need.


 And now, on to our Trifextra.  We want you to choose one of the pictures below and give us a 33-word response to it.

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14 comments:

  1. Sandra CrookJanuary 19, 2013 at 9:06 PM

    Some great sentiments here in so few words. Well done.

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 19, 2013 at 10:27 PM

    Trim and frugal use of words. Well written.

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  3. ReneeJanuary 19, 2013 at 11:28 PM

    'dream has broken into life..."
    I love that line. It says all.

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 20, 2013 at 2:07 AM

    Wonderful words!

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  5. Thomas Charles MacInnesJanuary 20, 2013 at 2:15 AM

    I agree with Renee, love that line!

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  6. DraugJanuary 20, 2013 at 3:48 AM

    You used the 33 words to full effect!

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  7. AnonymousJanuary 20, 2013 at 4:23 AM

    Great use of 33 words. I like the flow of "corrugated, crippled world".

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  8. StephJanuary 20, 2013 at 4:24 AM

    Corrugated, crippled world - that's very nice. We can hope and dream.

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  9. kymmJanuary 20, 2013 at 10:24 AM

    crippled world, yes.

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 20, 2013 at 1:16 PM

    Wonderful - I believe she will go far! Very inspiring.

    Cheryl

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  11. PattiKenJanuary 20, 2013 at 1:43 PM

    This is excellent! Loved it.

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  12. AnonymousJanuary 20, 2013 at 3:23 PM

    I love how powerful it was for it's length... very well written.

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  13. AtreyeeJanuary 21, 2013 at 4:50 AM

    Yes,"holding fast" is the key:-)Loved the imagery with "corrugated, crippled world " & "scattered dust of hopes"-very beautifully expressed:-)

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  14. TrifectaJanuary 21, 2013 at 12:34 PM

    Lovely imagery.

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