You told me I was radical
and surely out of place,
because I was too different;
and bent on drastic change.
And yet the course was simple;
at least it was to me,
for all I ever wanted,
was to see my heart revealed.
The policies I put in place,
were not political,
in any sense traditional;
but met my Soul's true need.
Your words dissected who I was,
sure stripped my Self apart,
but independence held my hand,
and led me out at last.
I dipped my toes in dross and dregs,
of who you thought I was,
and found in silken yearnings,
life's deep, abiding purpose.
I broke the laws and habits,
of what the world held dear,
and in the shattered moments,
at last, brought truth to bear.
RADICAL (adjective)
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Inspirational; bringing truth to bear in the fact of all those habits and institution is so hard to do! Nicely done.
ReplyDelete"...for all I ever wanted, was to see my heart revealed..." is the essence of this beautiful message. A wonderful poem.
ReplyDeleteA lot of poetry this week. Very very beautiful. I will return to this one again and again.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteI love this liberating line: "but independence held my hand,and led me out at last."
ReplyDeleteThanks to everyone for the feedback.
ReplyDeleteI dipped my toes in dross and dregs,
ReplyDeleteof who you thought I was, FANTASTIC! The whole poem is wonderful!
A beautifully written poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, I love your words and it has a strong ending. Love the lines "your words dissected who I was / sure stripped my Self apart"
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of independence holding your hand. Beautiful. Thanks for linking up.
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