The mirror in reflection,
gives lies and truth as one,
the vision may be ample,
or Goddess born again.
This body truly bountiful,
may portly be dismissed,
or seen as woman glorious;
abundant, fulsome, blessed.
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AMPLE (adj.)
gives lies and truth as one,
the vision may be ample,
or Goddess born again.
This body truly bountiful,
may portly be dismissed,
or seen as woman glorious;
abundant, fulsome, blessed.
http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2012/09/trifecta-week-forty-three.html?utm_source=feedburner&utm_medium=email&utm_campaign=Feed%3A+trifectawritingchallenge%2FIazs+%28Trifecta%29
AMPLE (adj.)
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Nice! Both the word itself AND the definition all in one. I like how you created the contrasting views as well.
ReplyDeleteIf only society viewed it this way, I'd be a goddess! Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteOnly you have to see it this way. I started quite some years ago to replace 'big boobs' with 'goddess breasts' when talking about myself.
DeleteThis is nice! Lies and truth as one. Perfect line.
ReplyDeleteVery pithy! And a great sentiment. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThe mirror giving lies and truth as one - this is a great line.
ReplyDeleteWhat a good idea. I have only just written it but have long thought it.
ReplyDeleteWow. That was an extremely successful few dozen words. This is really pretty. I love your elevated language. It makes the read even more beautiful. Thanks for linking up.
ReplyDeleteChoosing one's perception is key. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteI love the feeling and the message. "Woman glorious" succinctly describes the point. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteA lovely way to capture the magic and wonder of femininity.
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