Saturday, January 25, 2014

Stormclouds





In roiling, rampant clustering
The black clouds cawl the sky
And render daylight subjugate,
To lightning, thunder, rain.
The demon dance diminishes
The power of sun to shine,
And holds the elements in hand
Through drenching, roaring ride.

http://poetryjaam.blogspot.com/2014/01/look-to-clouds.html

8 comments:

  1. Pleasureful. Why does this remind me of
    "...When shall we three meet again?
    In thunder, lightning, or in rain?"

    I fancied another nice trip through "Macbeth's" opening.
    Thanks for your visit.

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  2. Those are definitely some strong clouds!! Love your descriptions.

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  3. This is so delightful... even in its thunderous way.

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  4. Ah yes those storm clouds can be so inspiring!

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  5. You have depicted some very powerful clouds!

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  6. There are some wonderful images and much power int his poem. Lovely!

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  7. A beautifully written poem, even better read aloud. I love the swing and rhythm here!

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