Friday, October 10, 2014

Lost


Lost light languishes,
deep yellow crushes,
black drinks meaning,
rolled tight into fibre
without form, shape,
purpose, drawing all
within trammelled
being, holding, falling
draped bright as night,
redolent, screaming,
as birds peck dark
and feathered blood.








http://dversepoets.com/2014/10/09/verbal-cubism-and-tender-buttons-meeting-the-bar/

6 comments:

  1. I love the menacing darkness of your words.. its like being lost in a nightmare, which I think fits well to the challenge...

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  2. I think mine disappeared again. (sigh!) Well, I like this spooky one a lot.

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  3. I like how darkness engulfs all...there's an eerie feel to it...

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  4. Nice, I thought each word moved the piece onward - especially liked the draped bright as night - very evocative to me

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  5. Dark. Have been reading Poe, and this fits well with some of his themes.

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