Lost light languishes,
deep yellow crushes,
black drinks meaning,
rolled tight into fibre
without form, shape,
purpose, drawing all
within trammelled
being, holding, falling
draped bright as night,
redolent, screaming,
as birds peck dark
and feathered blood.
http://dversepoets.com/2014/10/09/verbal-cubism-and-tender-buttons-meeting-the-bar/
I love the menacing darkness of your words.. its like being lost in a nightmare, which I think fits well to the challenge...
ReplyDeleteI think mine disappeared again. (sigh!) Well, I like this spooky one a lot.
ReplyDeleteI like how darkness engulfs all...there's an eerie feel to it...
ReplyDeleteGroovy piece. Love the last three lines.
ReplyDeleteNice, I thought each word moved the piece onward - especially liked the draped bright as night - very evocative to me
ReplyDeleteDark. Have been reading Poe, and this fits well with some of his themes.
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