Wednesday, May 8, 2013

Mother and child


Through  atoms of becoming
your blood did course with mine,
and sang the song of centuries,
as flesh was slow entwined.
Beneath the heart of mothering,
you grew to find your place,
and sought the light of birthing;
revealed material grace.
This lineage of love began,
in microscopic fold,
and found itself in being;
a new and brightening soul.







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8 comments:

  1. Brings a sweet taste in my mouth :).Nice .

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  2. A positive piece.

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  3. You make genetics sound so beautiful.

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  4. This is sweet and hopeful. Love the poetic pace, tight and singing.

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  5. this is beautiful!

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  6. Very nicely done!

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  7. So lovely! Fabulous take on the prompt!

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  8. Fantastic response to the prompt. "Microscopic fold" is quite a powerful image. Thank you for sharing this with us.

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