There did appear upon your face an image,
of what your mind had gathered up as thought,
and it belied the words that you were speaking;
expression did convey you were distraught.
It was a fleeting moment which revealed,
the pain which eyes and mouth so clearly showed,
and yet which was at odds with what you said;
I touched your arm so gently and tears flowed.
APPEAR
1a : to be or come in sight <the sun appears on the horizon>
b : to show up <appears promptly at eight each day>
2: to come formally before an authoritative body <must appear in court today>
3: to have an outward aspect : seem <appears happy enough>
of what your mind had gathered up as thought,
and it belied the words that you were speaking;
expression did convey you were distraught.
It was a fleeting moment which revealed,
the pain which eyes and mouth so clearly showed,
and yet which was at odds with what you said;
I touched your arm so gently and tears flowed.
APPEAR
1a : to be or come in sight <the sun appears on the horizon>
b : to show up <appears promptly at eight each day>
2: to come formally before an authoritative body <must appear in court today>
3: to have an outward aspect : seem <appears happy enough>
I love that final line. Very visual--I can see this happening. Thanks so much for linking up.
ReplyDeleteI love that last line as well! Beautiful writing!
ReplyDeleteLovely piece-- great writing! Poetic.
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Nice rhythm and content.
ReplyDeleteVery moving.. that single touch, that connection opens us up, and we know someone cares.
ReplyDeleteThis is very good.
ReplyDeleteSometimes we're so easy to read when we try to cover up our true feelings. This was beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThe touch and the tears... very evocative.
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