then certainty and wealth
which gave me all,
I wanted, thought I needed
and when it came I realised
money had a price -
payment made decisively
with your loss of life.
We are asking you to write 33 words exactly about three wishes that come at a high price to the wisher.
http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2012/10/trifextra-thirty-eight.html?utm_source=feedburner&utm_medium=email&utm_campaign=Feed%3A+trifectawritingchallenge%2FIazs+%28Trifecta%29
Whoa, good take on the prompt, very well tied up at the end.
ReplyDeleteI'm shocked that it's possible to say so much with so few words. Wow.
ReplyDeleteSimple and sad and so very moving.
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it so true that money doesnt buy happiness.However, we keep wishing.
ReplyDeleteI love the ironic message in this. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteWe must be careful for what we wish. You told that well here!
ReplyDeleteSad and so often true. Nice take.
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