Symbol of empowerment,
first tooth reveals age
of independence, physical;
then, when time decrees,
second teething, initiates
greater understanding,
beyond material and
visceral, out of diffuse
awareness and into realms
of focused consciousness.
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first tooth reveals age
of independence, physical;
then, when time decrees,
second teething, initiates
greater understanding,
beyond material and
visceral, out of diffuse
awareness and into realms
of focused consciousness.
http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2013/08/trifextra-week-eighty.html?utm_source=feedburner&utm_medium=email&utm_campaign=Feed%3A+trifectawritingchallenge%2FIazs+%28Trifecta%29
This is really cool.
ReplyDeleteLove how you managed to capture the story of life itself from that single prompt. Faboulous.
ReplyDeleteVery thought-provoking piece!
ReplyDeleteDraug wrote exactly what I was thinking. It is indeed really cool!
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