The soul does baulk when mind seeks to be master,
determines and dictates what will be so,
as heart can only hold itself in sorrowed waiting,
and consciousness incarnate is denied,
for thought has taken hold of reins unhidden;
the bit pulls sharp and harsh upon truth's teeth,
and yet in patient waiting will be proven,
that in relationship, more is achieved.
determines and dictates what will be so,
as heart can only hold itself in sorrowed waiting,
and consciousness incarnate is denied,
for thought has taken hold of reins unhidden;
the bit pulls sharp and harsh upon truth's teeth,
and yet in patient waiting will be proven,
that in relationship, more is achieved.
nice...if mind and heart decide to work together, there can be truly much achieved... ha...not always easy though to align them...they both have their own will at times...smiles
ReplyDeletegreat writing here, love the condensed flow of phrase here, really some great word combinations and thoughts throughout. Nicely done. thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteLovely cadence in your poem here... and a beautiful thoughts in your lines...
ReplyDeleteeach line seems to slip into the next
ReplyDeletecant argue with that last line...more is accomplished in relationship...when the elements come together for the greater good of the whole and not themselves...
ReplyDeletewise, beautifully expressed, and true...
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful! it is a win-win in the end. The last line is simply beautiful!
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