They've taken down
the shining light,
and over-day the river,
has returned to its
blackened, hidden self.
In that place of dreams,
night beds down,
forgetting tides and flow,
calling to the darkness,
arched as innocent
surrender,
true to sightless
possibility.
Nothing seen, just
imagined,
sounds of suckling mud,
as it flows, out of sight,
drifting in that way
of pure, and endless
being.
I step into the dream
and
have no questions, for all
may yet be made ready,
for the chill kiss of
dawn,
revealing what has
been
born in ebony
caverns.
Ephemeral the
figures move,
drawn from Akashic realms,
dipping trailing
fingers
into the wash of waves;
allowing the drown
of
becoming, to
release,
bequeath, unknown
treasures.
'What have you found?'
The voice rides
liquid crests,
somnolent, searching,
sighing,
at the breast of Soul;
deliquescent dressing
drench
of formless, rich
potential.
'I found myself.'
Evening moon
glittering
on strewn harvest of
luscious river
weeds.......
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OCTOBER MORNING ON THE
RIVER
They've taken down
the summer dams.
Over-night the river
has returned to its
drained and naked self.
In a dreamscape of loss,
the river’s bed has been
abandoned by water
hurrying
away to the ocean,
leaving the dregs of a
false lover's lust.
It is a bed of muddy
stones.
Far out on the bereft
channel
a silhouetted man bends,
picking up things,
examining them.
I step out across the
slippery rocks,
and ask, “What are you
finding?”
“Pretty stones,” he says,
“Indian beads…
This river’s been running
for thousands of years.”
“You’re finding Indian
beads?”
“Ah, sure, “ he says,
digging in his frayed
pant’s pocket,
extracting a bent nail, a
penny,
a paper clip, a common
stone…
"Guess they’re in my
knapsack”, he shrugs,
gesturing at the pack on
his back.
“Okay," I say,
sensing it time to wander away.
As I step back across the
rocky sludge,
he calls, "I found a
diamond once…"
"All right!" I
respond,
and look at the muck
of the river bed,
morning sun glistening off
the dying river weeds…
This is surreal, infused with a strong narrative, and absolutely gorgeous. This is probably my favorite poem of yours to date.
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