Wednesday, December 11, 2013

Melt


Crucible does cradle crushed and sulphured soul,
demanding that it melt and blackened, truly holds,
new form until the moment then is finely drawn;
with alchemy to charm and life to be reborn.


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6 comments:

  1. Oh, that first line. So lovely. This piece demands to be read again and again.

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  2. Your word choices here are wonderful, they create such stunning imagery.

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  3. This is beautifully written - all of it...but that first line really drew me in!

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  4. Gorgeous from start to finish!

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  5. Wow this is stunning. Such powerful words. Love the double alliteration in the first line.

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  6. This reads almost like a spell or a curse. Beautiful.

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