There was a blush upon your face,
a colour risen slow,
as I walked in and noticed you;
your eyes a darker glow.
With nothing said and nothing done,
beyond that first slow look,
our hearts were synchronised as one;
those many years ago.
And when your image rises up,
still resonates my mind,
I see the flush of cheek and brow;
that ember of desire.
a colour risen slow,
as I walked in and noticed you;
your eyes a darker glow.
With nothing said and nothing done,
beyond that first slow look,
our hearts were synchronised as one;
those many years ago.
And when your image rises up,
still resonates my mind,
I see the flush of cheek and brow;
that ember of desire.
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Beautiful lines culminating in the last one.
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI love this!
ReplyDeleteThe memories of love at first sight live on. Beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteThe build to the last line is great. I love it!
ReplyDeleteWhat everyone else said - the buildup to the last line. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks to all who took the time to read and comment.
ReplyDeleteWow! This is so good and reminds me of feelings that I thought we gone. Just lovely.
ReplyDeletememories can be wonderful emotion-links, as you've beautifully conveyed here
ReplyDelete"... the flush of cheek and brow;
ReplyDeletethat ember of desire."
Always.
Nice mood you set up.
ReplyDeleteSuch a sweet,romantically sentimental poem-nostalgia is never sweeter than when its about our loves:-)Beautifully expressed!
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