Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Colour

There was a blush upon your face,
a colour risen slow,
as I walked in and noticed you;
your eyes a darker glow.
With nothing said and nothing done,
beyond that first slow look,
our hearts were synchronised as one;
those many years ago.
And when your image rises up,
still resonates my mind,
I see the flush of cheek and brow;
that ember of desire.





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13 comments:

  1. Beautiful lines culminating in the last one.

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  2. The memories of love at first sight live on. Beautiful poem!

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  3. The build to the last line is great. I love it!

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  4. What everyone else said - the buildup to the last line. Very nice.

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  5. Thanks to all who took the time to read and comment.

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  6. Wow! This is so good and reminds me of feelings that I thought we gone. Just lovely.

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  7. memories can be wonderful emotion-links, as you've beautifully conveyed here

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  8. "... the flush of cheek and brow;
    that ember of desire."

    Always.

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  9. Such a sweet,romantically sentimental poem-nostalgia is never sweeter than when its about our loves:-)Beautifully expressed!

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