Wednesday, November 21, 2012


Flesh surrenders silkily
in passion's sensual cause,
to dance the steps seductive;
reveal pure reason's flaws.
As skin in tingled dreaming,
connects with heart and soul,
the drift of perfumed lust
consumes and soon enfolds.
The song orgasmic sings
through cell and dreaming mind,
in notes of wild surrender;
in melodies sublime.
Through rising tides of joy,
the waves will carry all,
beyond the place of knowing;
to spent and shuddered shores.

We are asking for an open write this week--33 to 333 words of erotic writing.  You can interpret that how you wish; we are imposing no other rules or limitations on you this week.  The goal is just to explore a type of writing you maybe haven't tried before.  It's, allegedly, not as easy as it looks.


  1. Gah, I wish I could write this beautifully! ;__;

  2. Wow! What a beautiful poem. You painted a perfect picture of one of the most beautiful moments two people can share and you did it with passion and, also, with class. Extremely impressive work.