Wednesday, June 7, 2023

The quality of being

 Being is so hard to find,

because it hides in dim

places, where time and

mind muddle to make 

real, to create that sense

which holds us in sure

ground; guides, protects

and binds us to self.



Being does not know 

itself unless we draw

a shape, smooth the 

edges, tidy the frayed

parts of soul, and call

upon our inner spirit

to know the truth of 

who and what it is.



Being cannot be led

or directed, but only 

enticed once we can

recognise that it exists,

beyond the ghostly 

dregs and dross of who

and what we are, for 

in those shaded realms

we are drawn into the 

lap of endless being. 

Poetics: Quality Poems | dVerse (dversepoets.com)

7 comments:

  1. This has become a leitmotif in western culture, me, what I am, what I believe I am, being the most important idea in the entire universe. What we are, as you point out, should be about integrity. We seem to have reduced it to appearance.

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  2. I agree with Jane’s comment and the philosophy of your quality of being, Roslyn, especially in the lines:
    ‘Being does not know
    itself unless we draw
    a shape…’
    and
    ‘Being cannot be led
    or directed, but only
    enticed once we can
    recognise that it exists’.

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  3. I love your thoughtful philosophical poem on being. We speak of human beings, and our well-being. It is who we really are minis the frills! Well done.

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  4. "Being is so hard to find, because it hides in dim places"
    You've shone a light on the quality of being- a thought provoking poem.

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  5. Insightful, specially the second stanza. It is a personal journey and we all bear the scars and frayed soul from our experiences. And good to read you again Roslyn.

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  6. There is wisdom in this, Roslyn... i appreciate reading your ponderings on "being".

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  7. Evocative poem that has got me thinking about my own concepts of what being and non-being are. Thank you, Roslyn.
    Li/Lisa/msjadeli@tao-talk

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