They've taken down the
shining light, and the
river, has returned to its
shining light, and the
river, has returned to its
blackened, hidden self.
In that place of
dreams,
night beds down, slow
forgetting tides and
flow,
calling to the
darkness,
arched as innocent
surrender,
true to sightless
possibility,
nothing seen,
just imagined,
sounds of suckling mud,
as it flows, out of
sight,
drifting in that sure way
of pure, and endless
being,
as I step into the dream
and
have no questions, for
all
may yet be made ready,
for the chill kiss of
dawn,
revealing what has
been
born in ebony
caverns, those
ephemeral figures creep,
drawn from Akashic
realms,
dipping trailing
fingers
into the wash of waves;
allowing the drown
of
becoming, to
release,
bequeath, unknown
treasures.
'What have you found?'
The voice rides
liquid crests,
somnolent, searching,
sighing,
at the breast of Soul; in
deliquescent dressing
drench
of formless, rich
potential.
'I found myself,' even though
I had not known I was lost.
Evening moon
glittering
on strewn harvest
of
luscious river weeds,
torn
from their beds, and
shaken
across the flooded
earth,
dressing muddy realms,
in
stalk, leaf and frond
of now
slow rotting death and
life.
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Such wonderful imagery, to envision as one reads your poem. So well done.
ReplyDeleteMany thanks.
DeleteWhat an incredible narrative
ReplyDeleteallowing the drown of / becoming," & "I found myself,' even though / I had not known I was lost." .....This reminds me of meditation and being lost in some profound thought to rediscover one self. Love how you've used the prompt.
ReplyDeletewow amazing imagery. A fantastic poem
ReplyDelete"In that place of dreams,
ReplyDeletenight beds down, slow
forgetting tides and flow,
calling to the darkness,
arched as innocent surrender,
true to sightless possibility,
nothing seen, just imagined,
sounds of suckling mud,"
The river, not so innocent, yet detached from its harm. I love the parallel to meditation and dream, to entering the dark and finding something deeper. Sometimes it feels the flood itself does that, but truly, we are changed when the waters recede again. Beautiful.
I really like this one. It seemed almost sensuous to me. Telling us to mind the balance of life.
ReplyDeleteSo many glorious lines in this Roslyn! I especially love: "have no questions, for all
ReplyDeletemay yet be made ready,
for the chill kiss of dawn,
revealing what has been" the true writing of a poet. I love it!
Oh so many finely-drawn word pictures. What a pleasure to absorb ... and deliquescent .. ah, now, that's special!
ReplyDeleteThanks to everyone who took the time to read and comment.
ReplyDeleteSuch amazing imagery!!
ReplyDeleteIncredible imagery! This narrative reads like a flood - amazing.
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