Thursday, May 18, 2017

Sensing

Through retinal reflection mind dictates,
what image we will find and draw as true,
in order that the world beyond makes sense;
calls meaning, from that which is obscure.

There is no right or wrong in how we see,
just ways of pulling line and form to shape,
and finding purpose in all that we dream;
with life made manifest as source creates.

 https://dversepoets.com/2017/05/16/poetics-sensory-play/#comment-123424

6 comments:

  1. A wonderful rhythm... and you cannot even guess how much this talks to me after having to go through eye surgery and for a time loosing my vision... (it's coming back now)

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    1. That must have been very hard. Glad you are on the mend.

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  2. It's a matter of perspective, and finding purpose in all that we dream ~ A lovely cadence to your verses ~

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  3. The mind gives us our perspective. I like the "calls meaning" and "finding purpose" phrases. I think I agree with the poem.

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  4. I think our creative mind can broaden our senses, using them in ways our logic mind cannot. Thanks for joining in.

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  5. It all depends on how we see it.. Beautifully penned.

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