Your work makes me think of Wordsworth.
That is quite a compliment. I would only wish. Thanks.
I love the ballad-y feel of this. Wonderful rhythm and sound.
Agree with Karen. It had the rhythm of a beautiful ballad.
I also love the rhythm, but I also love the first verse especially. It was so evocative. I've been talking to Thomas Marlowe and we are both missing the Trifecta Challenge. One thing led to another and we have decided to set up Light and Shade Challenge where there are prompts twice every week and a chance to share what inspiration strikes. We are not trying to be the same as Trifecta. They were awesome and I miss them. We do have some really exciting ideas of our own, though and can't wait to see what happens. It would be great if you could come and join us and see where this journey takes us. Good writers are always welcome. If you have any questions then get in touch either on the Light and Shade Challenge Blog http://lightandshadechallenge.blogspot.co.uk/ or on the Facebook page. It would be wonderful to hear from you. Lyssa M x
Thanks for that. And great news on the Challenge. I will be there.