Showiness astonishes,
dazzles through the days,
amazes and inspires,
sparkles now at play.
Vivacity entrances,
brightness is bequeathed,
glitter does excel
glory surely breathes.
Razzle through the dewdrops,
shivering at play,
quivering in glint of dance;
nature does display.
https://dversepoets.com/2016/10/04/razzle-dazzle-me/
dazzles through the days,
amazes and inspires,
sparkles now at play.
Vivacity entrances,
brightness is bequeathed,
glitter does excel
glory surely breathes.
Razzle through the dewdrops,
shivering at play,
quivering in glint of dance;
nature does display.
https://dversepoets.com/2016/10/04/razzle-dazzle-me/
I particularly like, "quivering in glint of dance; nature does display."
ReplyDeleteOh 💖💖 I love the play upon words here especially "Vivacity entrances, brightness is bequeathed, glitter does excel glory surely breathes" Beautifully penned 💖💖
ReplyDeleteLots of love,
Sanaa
Awesome use of rhyme here, helping create the mood of dazzle.
ReplyDeleteRhyming is so well done here -- yes, isn't it amazing to consider the many many ways that nature bedazzles us? Especially in this autumn season! I'm bedazzled!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem. Yes, nature does indeed dazzle us. Excellent rhyming.
ReplyDeletei can almost see those dewdrops.
ReplyDeletei love how quickly this poem reads.
wonderful!
The meter and rhyme makes this dazzle all by itself. Just lovely
ReplyDeletecool rhymes and high prompt word count...excellent work.
ReplyDeleteVery vivacious.
ReplyDeleteYou just can't read that without a big smile
ReplyDeleteBedazzling rhyme and rhythm to your words!
ReplyDeleteThis poem sparkles. The rhyme is wonderfully done. Love it.
ReplyDeleteLovely.
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