The dead have
silent teeth and empty throats,
they have no voice with which to speak, to cry
of all the horrors they have seen and been and
known; to call for justice, freedom from the
power of those who kill to claim what is not
theirs, the land of others, who suffocate children
in waves of dust and shredded metal moments,
where blood and tears and destiny are driven
deep into the waiting earth; dressing broken
fragments of their lives, their souls, their
hearts, that costuming of evil which war does
primp and posture into place, for those who
are the victims, for those who cannot speak,
and for whom the only hope can be for others,
that their throats are not empty, their teeth
are not silent, their words are not crushed
beneath the boot of evil and injustice and
military might, and that in the darkened
quietness of this awful, suppurating wound,
their only hope is that the voices of the living
will be speaking out for those who lie strewn,
fleshed like scattered crops, in that harvest
which bleeds and grieves and slowly seeds
the fields of future justice in aching Palestine.
Poetics – War Poetry | dVerse (dversepoets.com)
Riveting! You are their voice and it is moving! 👏
ReplyDeleteTouching and true, the millions that suffer atrocities at the hands of those "who kill to claim what is not
ReplyDeletetheirs, the land of others.." Thanks for sharing this. _/\_
Your opening lines are so powerful, as is the image of the children suffocated ‘in waves of dust and shredded metal moments’. I like how the perspective of your poem distances the perpetrators of violence and concentrates only on the victims, that the warmongers are symbolised by the ‘the boot of evil and injustice and / military might’.
ReplyDeleteSuch a powerful and riveting opening. This poem truly speaks for the dead and oppressed.
ReplyDeleteI agree, such a potent opening that leaves a huge impact afterwards. "their only hope is that the voices of the living
ReplyDeletewill be speaking out for those who lie strewn." Yes!
The opening line of this poem drags one in, unable to stop reading.
ReplyDeleteIt's gripping .....
You really paint the darkness and evil of war so well... the victims below and the victim above in union both dead and survivors with the perpetrator already far away
ReplyDeleteIt hurts to read as the ugliness of war is painted in full technicolor here. Egos kill. There HAS to be a way to set aside the past for a peaceful future for all.
ReplyDeleteLi/Lisa @tao-talk
Silent teeth empty throats, Palestine, and everywhere. sigh. So well written.
DeleteA potent beginning....a poem that is visceral in its pain.
ReplyDeleteThis poem pulls you in so far, it is impossible to stop reading it.
ReplyDelete"that costuming of evil which war does
primp and posture into place, . . .