tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post982732722135541114..comments2024-01-08T08:43:29.509+10:30Comments on roslyn ross - small stones and other poems: PatternRoslyn Rosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-38509483862303175232014-08-25T07:36:57.780+09:302014-08-25T07:36:57.780+09:30Yes - I think you very nearly managed it - differe...Yes - I think you very nearly managed it - different of course, yours - but somehow like Amy Lowell's "Patterns" - and not nearly as long - more poetic in a way.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-8332744570671276612014-08-24T12:26:36.556+09:302014-08-24T12:26:36.556+09:30It is the closer look that reveals the cracks and ...It is the closer look that reveals the cracks and the truth beneath the pleasing pattern. You paint a sad tale of love turned sour very well. Enjoyed this one !rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-3139785039670348102014-08-24T04:24:35.548+09:302014-08-24T04:24:35.548+09:30yes, we live and love in patterns we often never i...yes, we live and love in patterns we often never inspect or realize.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-71977344276475751672014-08-24T02:53:36.272+09:302014-08-24T02:53:36.272+09:30Ros, great idea to refer to patterns of relationsh...Ros, great idea to refer to patterns of relationships as a template. And then there are those places that just don't fit. Such a sad tone to this poem. Thanks for linking.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com