tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post7560295555413223344..comments2024-01-08T08:43:29.509+10:30Comments on roslyn ross - small stones and other poems: DARK NIGHT OF THE SOULRoslyn Rosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-88417546591643250942015-07-12T04:05:59.228+09:302015-07-12T04:05:59.228+09:30broken - then remade. That is where our hope lies ...broken - then remade. That is where our hope lies (darkness or light)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-3528329297297941252015-07-11T01:45:53.258+09:302015-07-11T01:45:53.258+09:30Great poem. Great poem. Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-80054964660024100652015-07-10T11:51:21.257+09:302015-07-10T11:51:21.257+09:30Light and dark, joy and pain.....I was glad to hea...Light and dark, joy and pain.....I was glad to hear the hope of reconciliation in the closing lines. I really enjoyed the rhythm and meter of this poem.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-51023567459243158092015-07-10T04:19:55.991+09:302015-07-10T04:19:55.991+09:30A beautiful ballad.. love how you have worked with...A beautiful ballad.. love how you have worked with the opposites.. it really paint a picture that is more complete... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-28836665489761139302015-07-10T01:21:54.948+09:302015-07-10T01:21:54.948+09:30The cross of caring can be light - excellent first...The cross of caring can be light - excellent first line really makes your words work with the pain and hurt.alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-40601372879171026072015-07-10T01:20:14.184+09:302015-07-10T01:20:14.184+09:30Agreed with Mary, the last stanza holds the hope t...Agreed with Mary, the last stanza holds the hope that all is not lost and that reconciliation is just a few steps away.. Beautifully penned :D Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-52002638046791428412015-07-09T23:34:12.761+09:302015-07-09T23:34:12.761+09:30So true - within all relationships there is hurt a...So true - within all relationships there is hurt as well as joy. Your last stanza is a hopeful one, showing reconciliation is always possible.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-47015140713119089222015-07-09T23:09:58.332+09:302015-07-09T23:09:58.332+09:30lack of warmth, love, bitterness, pain may remind ...lack of warmth, love, bitterness, pain may remind one of night which is all but dark...but just like the dawn there's "the broken, then re-made" is only "a step away"....<br />I think if you press the refresh button at PU page you might make Mr. Linky work for you...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-67002310402240795342015-07-09T21:14:09.605+09:302015-07-09T21:14:09.605+09:30Really delightful read. Really delightful read. Blogorattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12821621371176285384noreply@blogger.com