tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post6325709172459951882..comments2024-01-08T08:43:29.509+10:30Comments on roslyn ross - small stones and other poems: Bell of midnightRoslyn Rosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-84246565091918167912014-01-25T03:11:46.850+10:302014-01-25T03:11:46.850+10:30WHOA! This is amazing, a very lyrical and song-lik...WHOA! This is amazing, a very lyrical and song-like documentary of a journey from life to death to...afterlife. I could picture this set to music.<br /><br />-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-35843979599788500292014-01-23T21:04:45.711+10:302014-01-23T21:04:45.711+10:30My favorite lines -
"Scales of doubt were li...My favorite lines - <br />"Scales of doubt were lifting,<br />fluttering through pain,<br />kindling fires to burn within;<br />signals of hope's gain."<br />I really like the message of the pain lifting away and the flow of the words.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-12629936745054929632014-01-22T17:07:47.932+10:302014-01-22T17:07:47.932+10:30You have given us some wonderful phrases here, and...You have given us some wonderful phrases here, and made it rhyme as well. Bravo.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-38747024048690580712014-01-22T06:43:20.084+10:302014-01-22T06:43:20.084+10:30Rhythm created by the end rhymes makes this sound ...Rhythm created by the end rhymes makes this sound like a troubadour's ballad. Amazing,<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-40808909759799586802014-01-21T22:50:19.618+10:302014-01-21T22:50:19.618+10:30Thanks. This one was a bit more challenging.Thanks. This one was a bit more challenging.Roslyn Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-4339524453205030202014-01-21T22:48:42.976+10:302014-01-21T22:48:42.976+10:30Wow...
Bell of midnight sounded deep,
Illusory be...Wow... <br />Bell of midnight sounded deep,<br />Illusory became this world,<br />Dreams did ebb in misty throng,<br />Scales of doubt were lifting,<br />the boatman ever waiting;<br />eternal path full known. <br /><br />If you written nothing but these lines it would have still been amazing but all together... wow<br /><br />Debi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.com