tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post523633201489193847..comments2024-01-08T08:43:29.509+10:30Comments on roslyn ross - small stones and other poems: Autumn leavesRoslyn Rosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-18432900192810208692017-05-21T05:39:02.656+09:302017-05-21T05:39:02.656+09:30I love the autumn season, aside from spring & ...I love the autumn season, aside from spring & am fascinated with leaves falling into death, into this ever cycle of the seasons ~ Have a good season ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-10747116442196847162017-05-21T03:58:42.322+09:302017-05-21T03:58:42.322+09:30This is beautiful!
I love these:
"when they...This is beautiful!<br /><br />I love these:<br /><br />"when they must fall and fall and fall<br />out of the place they called home"<br /><br />"holding their arms up<br />to the inevitable rotting"✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-10635871012565506042017-05-20T20:41:27.575+09:302017-05-20T20:41:27.575+09:30The dance of the trees and their leaf fall is full...The dance of the trees and their leaf fall is fully present in your well crafted piece.Paul John Dearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08976172444697072142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-83240537552653701812017-05-20T12:30:04.650+09:302017-05-20T12:30:04.650+09:30We are heading for winter in this part of the worl...We are heading for winter in this part of the world. Although with a Mediterranean style climate, not as severe as you experience.Roslyn Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-77056659593579745832017-05-20T12:28:44.187+09:302017-05-20T12:28:44.187+09:30Yes, that breathing in and out of the falling leav...Yes, that breathing in and out of the falling leaves.Roslyn Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-90726874658334693812017-05-20T12:28:00.635+09:302017-05-20T12:28:00.635+09:30I am in the Adelaide Hills where, like Melbourne, ...I am in the Adelaide Hills where, like Melbourne, a place I have lived, has many trees planted by the European settlers.Roslyn Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-2871326490838463752017-05-20T09:40:20.719+09:302017-05-20T09:40:20.719+09:30I've just read your poem after returning from ...I've just read your poem after returning from a run with my dog, Roslyn. Are you in Melbourne too, by any chance? You captured exactly what I saw as I ran. Such a beautiful, wistful feeling you've left me with. I love Autumn. A lovely poem :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10897452692451981880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-43624255187036604042017-05-20T00:53:56.365+09:302017-05-20T00:53:56.365+09:30I had the same thought as Lynn, especially liking ...I had the same thought as Lynn, especially liking the 'fall and fall and fall.'Jane Doughertyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14700193165487305298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-90398593049308593272017-05-19T16:43:41.657+09:302017-05-19T16:43:41.657+09:30I love those opening lines. I love autumn and your...I love those opening lines. I love autumn and your poem reminded me why!Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-42042268271302080012017-05-19T13:59:06.920+09:302017-05-19T13:59:06.920+09:30This is a wonderful autumn poem that seems far awa...This is a wonderful autumn poem that seems far away for early summer here. A great reminder that without the shredding of leaves there wouldn't be this bursting of new.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-47276283540271321882017-05-19T11:03:41.088+09:302017-05-19T11:03:41.088+09:30Your use of enjambment makes this flow...and fall ...Your use of enjambment makes this flow...and fall and fall like dying leaves.lynn__https://www.blogger.com/profile/03991892804149727665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-2165243523379552017-05-19T10:35:04.368+09:302017-05-19T10:35:04.368+09:30I really like the way you describe autumn in this ...I really like the way you describe autumn in this piece through the cycle of leaves. Well done. :)Arcadia Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02632127814188649845noreply@blogger.com