tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post4289825908513233407..comments2024-01-08T08:43:29.509+10:30Comments on roslyn ross - small stones and other poems: Stream of consciousnessRoslyn Rosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-53982710163183935642012-10-04T20:56:10.564+09:302012-10-04T20:56:10.564+09:30I do believe consciousness is like an ocean or a w...I do believe consciousness is like an ocean or a web and that everything is consciousness and we, along with everything else, are manifestations in and from that web or ocean of consciousness.Roslyn Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-83811777781466786842012-10-04T08:18:32.723+09:302012-10-04T08:18:32.723+09:30An interesting allegory of consciousness as a vast...An interesting allegory of consciousness as a vast ocean, with profound depths and vibration which enthrall through their unexpected complexity. I love the cyclicity of the poem, the way the tides are "brought to birth again".Andra Negroiuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09758021445297503414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-22578282451169636312012-10-04T05:48:57.433+09:302012-10-04T05:48:57.433+09:30"waves of thought which
drift and drown,
into..."waves of thought which<br />drift and drown,<br />into the sea of knowing,"<br /><br />This is my favorite part!!!<br /><br />I love the inclusive, collective energy of this piece.<br /><br />If this is how your thoughts and heart streams, I gather a sense of deep connectivity to what IS, from you. Peace.<br /><br />Lovely! Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-66412262519556919182012-10-03T19:43:29.165+09:302012-10-03T19:43:29.165+09:30Your stream is much smoother than mine. I do like ...Your stream is much smoother than mine. I do like that central conceit and the way your sounds reinforce it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-27652933842206999032012-10-03T19:03:26.408+09:302012-10-03T19:03:26.408+09:30Thanks Sabio - Thanks Sabio - Roslyn Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-74528688295375876192012-10-03T18:46:07.792+09:302012-10-03T18:46:07.792+09:30@ Roslyn Ross
Interestingly, we both challenge the...<b>@ Roslyn Ross</b><br />Interestingly, we both challenge the idea of "<i><b>Stream</b></i> of Consciousness"<br />But my poem is a bit unkind to the "Mother-Ocean" meme and the "Mind" (your "sea of knowing", perhaps -- though you did not capitalize Mind (as I didn't either)).<br /><br />I love your rhyming and line-breaks -- flows like a stream: very pleasant.<br />Sabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.com