tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post3684166818510191609..comments2024-01-08T08:43:29.509+10:30Comments on roslyn ross - small stones and other poems: metaphorRoslyn Rosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-89467525917293521702014-09-14T12:14:07.538+09:302014-09-14T12:14:07.538+09:30Enjoyed both, the first about one becoming the &qu...Enjoyed both, the first about one becoming the "metaphor,"and especially the second using metaphor of the "crippled bird." Amazing how that might define each of us at some point in our lives. Well done!Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-52043062656940982692014-09-14T04:29:27.999+09:302014-09-14T04:29:27.999+09:30Have to echo those above--the 2nd part is the hear...Have to echo those above--the 2nd part is the heart of this write... especially liked <br />how you ended it, "destiny does shake the tree;<br />joy will learn again to speak" indeed it will...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-30002223896982166802014-09-13T11:08:23.608+09:302014-09-13T11:08:23.608+09:30Yes, that second poem really showed it.Yes, that second poem really showed it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18329773014118837806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-32551125812613991492014-09-13T04:20:38.780+09:302014-09-13T04:20:38.780+09:30Your second poem is an excellent example.. Your second poem is an excellent example.. brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-68175072751980487642014-09-13T03:37:46.926+09:302014-09-13T03:37:46.926+09:30touching metaphors....shadows and spirits..love an...touching metaphors....shadows and spirits..love and denialKathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-75392499370505576202014-09-13T03:06:35.548+09:302014-09-13T03:06:35.548+09:30rich and nuanced - how often we see others only th...rich and nuanced - how often we see others only though our own lens. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-18976662789948318212014-09-12T21:48:03.411+09:302014-09-12T21:48:03.411+09:30Very clever use of the metaphor. I particularly li...Very clever use of the metaphor. I particularly like the second stanza. Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-76127938670885339752014-09-12T21:40:02.639+09:302014-09-12T21:40:02.639+09:30Lovely metaphors, great ending, Lovely metaphors, great ending, Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-63533709120376026182014-09-12T20:05:00.370+09:302014-09-12T20:05:00.370+09:30A very poignant plaint, with intense metaphors thr...A very poignant plaint, with intense metaphors throughout. Thanks, Roslyn. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com