tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post335195894064380268..comments2024-01-08T08:43:29.509+10:30Comments on roslyn ross - small stones and other poems: Mind dropped into morningRoslyn Rosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-66487068927436463232013-07-08T23:19:39.279+09:302013-07-08T23:19:39.279+09:30Drop dead first line!
I love the way it falls and ...Drop dead first line!<br />I love the way it falls and crumbles, never quite recovering..kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-90849488581489213452013-07-08T13:14:38.023+09:302013-07-08T13:14:38.023+09:30Those first two lines in particular are just stell...Those first two lines in particular are just stellar, but the whole poem ought to be set to music, in my opinion.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-11075866812494425292013-07-08T13:12:13.634+09:302013-07-08T13:12:13.634+09:30Each line is a gem. Amazing work. Thanks for linki...Each line is a gem. Amazing work. Thanks for linking up. Please remember to return for the voting!Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12700687481057612773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-74975245358577412072013-07-08T11:19:09.988+09:302013-07-08T11:19:09.988+09:30Every time I read it, I get something different. A...Every time I read it, I get something different. And each time it's good!<br /><br />http://debbiesdays.wordpress.comDebrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12930420287961403457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-50383151013059345922013-07-07T14:34:03.497+09:302013-07-07T14:34:03.497+09:30I love "skirts of dawn"
this is so well ...I love "skirts of dawn"<br />this is so well done.PurpleMoosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05593657030942243283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-47996677250699042492013-07-07T13:55:20.335+09:302013-07-07T13:55:20.335+09:30There's some lovely imagery in this, and it ta...There's some lovely imagery in this, and it taps right into emotions I wish weren't quite so familiar.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00736632012288650571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-60249132824427511992013-07-07T11:57:21.362+09:302013-07-07T11:57:21.362+09:30I really enjoyed the images that your word choice ...I really enjoyed the images that your word choice stirred up in my mind =) 'huddled' 'dropped' 'scattered' 'shaken.' Very nice. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04120797712318289605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-79910483925297760392013-07-07T09:43:19.447+09:302013-07-07T09:43:19.447+09:30Do you have a looking glass into my house? Enjoyed...Do you have a looking glass into my house? Enjoyed.LaTonya Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17837979981517423142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-91096493120815325922013-07-07T04:10:02.748+09:302013-07-07T04:10:02.748+09:30This is a really great poem and my favorite of the...This is a really great poem and my favorite of the day!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-78554570171026985942013-07-07T02:04:52.392+09:302013-07-07T02:04:52.392+09:30I'm with Draug.I'm with Draug. tedstrutzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09853272125990540823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-21596641199463843142013-07-07T00:23:29.780+09:302013-07-07T00:23:29.780+09:30This whole thing is great. Awesome opening line.This whole thing is great. Awesome opening line.Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.com