tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post2626220930653934113..comments2024-01-08T08:43:29.509+10:30Comments on roslyn ross - small stones and other poems: SolaceRoslyn Rosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-41333713101022696432015-09-02T02:53:09.377+09:302015-09-02T02:53:09.377+09:30love the alliteration in the first line of the sec...love the alliteration in the first line of the second quatrain. "Solace sipped so slowly". The repeated sounds, and the fact that the "s" sound takes a wee bit longer to sound out than most other letters really emphasized the slowness with which solace sipped :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05126230685516232230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-2969030063011919572015-08-29T12:21:46.013+09:302015-08-29T12:21:46.013+09:30A mix of sorrow and solace, curious cup indeed!A mix of sorrow and solace, curious cup indeed!lynn__https://www.blogger.com/profile/03991892804149727665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-77542508431424781652015-08-29T09:07:22.581+09:302015-08-29T09:07:22.581+09:30stomach surely soured;
Love would find no peace.
...stomach surely soured;<br />Love would find no peace.<br /><br />Not easy to grapple with sorrow as the the sadness lingers on with one's emotions<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-83101947242810831322015-08-29T07:48:01.436+09:302015-08-29T07:48:01.436+09:30Ouch. Elegant painOuch. Elegant painSabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-39276711061975080152015-08-29T06:57:42.925+09:302015-08-29T06:57:42.925+09:30Yes! This was an aural delight!Yes! This was an aural delight!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18337746905154922607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-51479511242469459202015-08-29T05:37:44.043+09:302015-08-29T05:37:44.043+09:30That inner black cat caught my heart.. anything bl...That inner black cat caught my heart.. anything black inside makes it hard.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-23385663779393836712015-08-29T03:46:16.662+09:302015-08-29T03:46:16.662+09:30There is plenty of sorrow to go around, it seems a...There is plenty of sorrow to go around, it seems and many not personally affected by it share that wine of grief. Nicely done. And safe travels, Roslyn.Victoria Ceretto-Slottohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11791036961620087347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-42225240833774696882015-08-29T03:19:39.883+09:302015-08-29T03:19:39.883+09:30You had me at /black cat of inner play/.You had me at /black cat of inner play/.Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-64317483504106984492015-08-29T03:05:04.696+09:302015-08-29T03:05:04.696+09:30If only we can rid the world
of cups and just be
A...If only we can rid the world<br />of cups and just be<br />Awine<br />of Love<br />that<br />overflows<br />and justs<br />flows<br />flows<br />as<br />ONE..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-26803776315438671622015-08-29T02:25:56.090+09:302015-08-29T02:25:56.090+09:30LOVE "the wine of grief." Fantastic.LOVE "the wine of grief." Fantastic. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-44361358963403232422015-08-28T21:42:25.739+09:302015-08-28T21:42:25.739+09:30If the wine is filled with grief, then the stomach...If the wine is filled with grief, then the stomach will surely be soured. Enjoyed this one Ros ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-13372709057967452022015-08-28T17:53:25.136+09:302015-08-28T17:53:25.136+09:30Oh ! Wow. Too many things said and unsaid in this ...Oh ! Wow. Too many things said and unsaid in this very sort poem. Thank you for sharingShamsud Ahmedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10402062675521045468noreply@blogger.com