tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post1665165988869849790..comments2024-01-08T08:43:29.509+10:30Comments on roslyn ross - small stones and other poems: SilenceRoslyn Rosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-56588961912026041092018-01-07T23:48:10.592+10:302018-01-07T23:48:10.592+10:30beautiful poem,read in silence,speaks....beautiful poem,read in silence,speaks....Anjum Wasim Darhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01252859337697790445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-41132744991111012822018-01-06T10:16:46.322+10:302018-01-06T10:16:46.322+10:30I like the part about holding court in silence and...I like the part about holding court in silence and roiling.Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-87532300811148129802018-01-06T09:44:56.567+10:302018-01-06T09:44:56.567+10:30Nice work here--by the time I reached the end of t...Nice work here--by the time I reached the end of the poem, I really felt like everything had slowed down and gone quiet. Also really enjoyed the "liquid language." Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-82091835662912693362018-01-06T01:31:06.290+10:302018-01-06T01:31:06.290+10:30So well crafted! The best spot is right before th...So well crafted! The best spot is right before the word 'revealed.' Very effective.Jillyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14971432705586726610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7310561639547971922.post-48903631613613231182018-01-05T19:44:08.272+10:302018-01-05T19:44:08.272+10:30The use of ellipsises works so well here... really...The use of ellipsises works so well here... really great to add that hesitation between the words. That's the kind of silence I was afterbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com